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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Dead office chad As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Mildly autistic swashbuckling locus fat ankles "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: ivory angry hall they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Hairraiser institution Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: mentally impaired curious lodge ape As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Spectacular feces lay Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: sienna apoplectic rehab “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: House-broken twinkling hissy fit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Dead office chad i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: sienna apoplectic rehab Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Dead office chad C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Mildly autistic swashbuckling locus fat ankles "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: ivory angry hall Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: sienna apoplectic rehab Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: ivory angry hall You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: transparent roommate While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Indecent Awkward Cruise Ship (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: fear-inspiring church death wish As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: deranged stimulating library love of her life This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Dead office chad (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Marvelous lilac double fault (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: tan cuck (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Chartreuse Hilarious Milk (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: shaky indigo nursing home Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Unholy Digit Ratio Corner As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Frisky bawdyhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: provocative reading party azn (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Hideous diverse house FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: up-to-no-good theater stage mad-dog skullcap (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: deranged stimulating library love of her life (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: electric resort goal in life (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Poppy pistol (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: jet-lagged charismatic jap round eye (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Marvelous lilac double fault (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: adventurous slippery meetinghouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: up-to-no-good theater stage mad-dog skullcap (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: up-to-no-good theater stage mad-dog skullcap As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: House-broken twinkling hissy fit i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Filthy bateful prole (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: House-broken twinkling hissy fit i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: dashing canary ratface (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Sticky Passionate School Cafeteria Pozpig A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: translucent bespoke therapy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Mildly autistic swashbuckling locus fat ankles sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: adulterous forum i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Dead office chad i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: adulterous forum As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Dead office chad doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: adulterous forum it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: ivory angry hall Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Deep national security agency you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: drunken motley point blood rage Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: House-broken twinkling hissy fit turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: translucent bespoke therapy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: electric resort goal in life As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Odious Rough-skinned Athletic Conference New Version The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Sticky Passionate School Cafeteria Pozpig star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Odious Rough-skinned Athletic Conference New Version still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: sienna apoplectic rehab (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: provocative reading party azn Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Aquamarine Metal Temple Community Account So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Aquamarine Metal Temple Community Account Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376411) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: pungent rose field telephone Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Boyish Zippy Famous Landscape Painting Space A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Fuchsia Wonderful Candlestick Maker Indirect Expression two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: soul-stirring whorehouse C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Brilliant Elite Parlour Pervert As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: insecure trailer park Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Filthy bateful prole This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: deranged stimulating library love of her life Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Shimmering Affirmative Action Crackhouse What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: deranged stimulating library love of her life You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: purple flirting tanning salon corn cake Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: purple flirting tanning salon corn cake A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: aromatic obsidian location genital piercing andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: Exhilarant flushed half-breed Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Deep national security agency A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42379691) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Carmine Mischievous Personal Credit Line State As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44008916) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#49827228) |
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