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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: purple hot mexican boistinker As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Supple effete gay wizard lay "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Spectacular ruby twinkling uncleanness parlor they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Razzmatazz trust fund useless brakes Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: navy milk As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: hideous international law enforcement agency therapy Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: bossy range main people “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: charismatic federal yarmulke degenerate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: purple hot mexican boistinker i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: bossy range main people Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: purple hot mexican boistinker C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Supple effete gay wizard lay "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Spectacular ruby twinkling uncleanness parlor Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: bossy range main people Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Spectacular ruby twinkling uncleanness parlor You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Galvanic Potus Goal In Life While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Contagious jade lettuce persian (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Primrose School Cafeteria As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Titillating cobalt rigor This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: purple hot mexican boistinker (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Nofapping crawly personal credit line station (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: tripping impertinent new version box office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: coiffed claret black woman Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Metal Kitty Doctorate As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: yapping naked idiot (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: electric center mad-dog skullcap (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Heady pearly plaza FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Opaque Library (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Titillating cobalt rigor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376195) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Opaque Library (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Opaque Library As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: charismatic federal yarmulke degenerate i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Mahogany Cerebral Preventive Strike (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: charismatic federal yarmulke degenerate i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: jet startling stage hairy legs A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Supple effete gay wizard lay sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: mind-boggling twinkling stead mediation i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: purple hot mexican boistinker i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: mind-boggling twinkling stead mediation As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: purple hot mexican boistinker doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: mind-boggling twinkling stead mediation it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Spectacular ruby twinkling uncleanness parlor Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: bronze aphrodisiac generalized bond state you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: vibrant menage liquid oxygen Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: charismatic federal yarmulke degenerate turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Internet-worthy trump supporter tanning salon As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Cowardly national security agency The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: jet startling stage hairy legs star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Cowardly national security agency still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: vivacious arrogant fanboi quadroon So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Odious mustard scourge upon the earth dragon Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Bright base elastic band A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Trip Elite Alpha House two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: milky big indirect expression school C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: gold market As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Wonderful amethyst mad cow disease nursing home Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Mahogany Cerebral Preventive Strike This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: salmon blood rage Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: salmon blood rage A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Misunderstood orchestra pit andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: flesh water buffalo property Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: saffron crackhouse As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44008916) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#49827228) |
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