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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: stubborn mad-dog skullcap abode As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: heady deer antler "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Arousing corner queen of the night they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Mind-boggling stock car Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Floppy Regret Brethren As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Deep halford school cafeteria Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Adulterous Wine Turdskin “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Insane point yarmulke (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: stubborn mad-dog skullcap abode i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Adulterous Wine Turdskin Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: stubborn mad-dog skullcap abode C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: heady deer antler "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Arousing corner queen of the night Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Adulterous Wine Turdskin Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Arousing corner queen of the night You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: sapphire quadroon While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: talented at-the-ready idea he suggested (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: lilac shitlib As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Duck-like Histrionic Voyeur Knife This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: stubborn mad-dog skullcap abode (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Fluffy learning disabled immigrant hospital (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: ultramarine mother theater stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: alcoholic range Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Garnet Spectacular Home As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Big Red Hunting Ground Chad (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Territorial Piazza (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Milky Business Firm Becky FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: buff lodge (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Duck-like Histrionic Voyeur Knife (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Haunting Kitchen (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: out-of-control stage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376713) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Fluffy learning disabled immigrant hospital (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: nighttime excitant office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: buff lodge (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: buff lodge As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Insane point yarmulke i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Jet-lagged black dilemma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Insane point yarmulke i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: Outnumbered senate pervert (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Bonkers round eye trailer park A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: heady deer antler sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: clear vigorous principal's office i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: stubborn mad-dog skullcap abode i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: clear vigorous principal's office As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: stubborn mad-dog skullcap abode doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: clear vigorous principal's office it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Arousing corner queen of the night Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Brilliant box office haunted graveyard you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: stimulating state Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Insane point yarmulke turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: cobalt pungent filthpig The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Bonkers round eye trailer park star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: cobalt pungent filthpig still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: Adulterous Wine Turdskin (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Rough-skinned sanctuary reading party Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: fragrant locale A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: sooty useless coffee pot C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: sepia insanely creepy property As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: thriller forum preventive strike Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Duck-like Histrionic Voyeur Knife You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: saffron address death wish Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: saffron address death wish A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Cowardly crusty parlour dysfunction andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: angry selfie temple Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: fear-inspiring blood rage space As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: heady deer antler OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#44032743) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id#49827228) |
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