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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: startled bat-shit-crazy den As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle box office "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: rusted antidepressant drug they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Frum Passionate Piazza Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: odious business firm As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Jade buck-toothed death wish community account Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: Irate state “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Aquamarine domesticated house partner (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: startled bat-shit-crazy den i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: Irate state Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: startled bat-shit-crazy den C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle box office "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: rusted antidepressant drug Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Irate state Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: rusted antidepressant drug You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Orange Supple Private Investor While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Tan adulterous persian office (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: swashbuckling cocky fat ankles center As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: saffron address This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: startled bat-shit-crazy den (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Hairless spectacular mad cow disease field (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376392) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: wonderful learning disabled azn theater Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Unhinged Dog Poop Whorehouse As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Crimson Thirsty Ticket Booth (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Vibrant point reading party (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Filthy gunner newt FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Sapphire Frozen Organic Girlfriend (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: saffron address (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Talented Theater Stage Toilet Seat (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: ebony chest-beating tanning salon (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Sapphire Frozen Organic Girlfriend (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Sapphire Frozen Organic Girlfriend As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Aquamarine domesticated house partner i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: dark elastic band (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Aquamarine domesticated house partner i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376189) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Pungent maroon sandwich A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Rose codepig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle box office sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Cracking Transparent Roommate Plaza i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: startled bat-shit-crazy den i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Cracking Transparent Roommate Plaza As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: startled bat-shit-crazy den doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Cracking Transparent Roommate Plaza it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: rusted antidepressant drug Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Hideous heaven mexican you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: narrow-minded chestnut resort Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Aquamarine domesticated house partner turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: titillating tripping corn cake As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: chrome startling cuck native The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: Pungent maroon sandwich star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376306) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: chrome startling cuck native still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: Irate state (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Vibrant point reading party Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Red abnormal menage So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Pontificating slate alpha Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: flickering step-uncle's house tattoo A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: laughsome coral cruise ship main people two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: Bearded electric furnace blood rage C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Nubile pocket flask As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: at-the-ready knife juggernaut Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: saffron address You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: talking kitchen weed whacker Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: talking kitchen weed whacker A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: brass provocative school andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Racy crystalline stage As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#44008916) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: UN peacekeeper "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: hmmm i think weather is fraudlies Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2...id.#49827228) |
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