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Here are a couple poems i wrote in 1995. lol i found them cleaning up.

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Black point
  02/18/18
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Big bearded persian shrine
  02/18/18
i am embarrassed having read it
Twisted Supple Trump Supporter
  02/18/18
you were like 27 back then.
irradiated hunting ground nursing home
  02/18/18
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fragrant sick center candlestick maker
  02/18/18
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Black point
  02/18/18
you'd be a black great grandfather by now.
irradiated hunting ground nursing home
  02/18/18
cr. I am living like someone in the future w a 200 year lif...
Black point
  02/18/18
It's word for water is diminishment
sadistic institution
  02/18/18
I remember i really liked that line. something like that was...
Black point
  02/18/18
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Black point
  02/18/18
This one is the best. The first one would be good if it star...
Odious school
  02/19/18
haha yeah. I guess so. I have more ... not with me, but at...
Black point
  02/19/18
I like this one
Titillating faggot firefighter
  02/19/18
Interesting - I didn't mind the first two but this one is a ...
lavender concupiscible stage trust fund
  02/19/18
Yep, lawyer now. I know--its funny that you say that abo...
Black point
  02/19/18
Trying to make it look like a slug is a little much, but you...
Odious school
  02/19/18
lol yeah. heh. I was intimidated by any strict form but I w...
Black point
  02/19/18
lol that’s actually pretty good
disgusting frum crackhouse filthpig
  02/19/18
i like this one
exciting mother
  02/19/18
The others were terrible, this one is 180 (although the jury...
Appetizing depressive garrison
  02/28/18
Eh half of why any poem works is in the end unintentional, f...
Black point
  02/28/18
okay that one was fine
buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge
  03/02/18
this was good, spaceporn. repoast it, plz.
Magenta razzle new version bawdyhouse
  04/24/18
I aim to please. imgurs giving me trouble right now but I wi...
Black point
  04/24/18
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Black point
  02/19/18
beautiful. thanks for sharing.
charismatic hot liquid oxygen set
  02/19/18
tyty Maybe I'll put up some more, from when I was in my l...
Black point
  02/19/18
Great writing for a small child!
fantasy-prone home
  02/19/18
I know, rite!
Black point
  02/19/18
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Black point
  02/20/18
Wily niggers indeed
Appetizing depressive garrison
  02/28/18
180. I saw that too! Lol I knew what's up
Black point
  02/28/18
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Black point
  02/20/18
You published them?
buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge
  03/02/18
yeah, sorry to say--some of them I did, here and there.
Black point
  03/02/18
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Black point
  02/20/18
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Black point
  02/26/18
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Black point
  02/27/18
is there any money anymore in poetry? like fellowships or g...
filthy cheese-eating mexican circlehead
  02/28/18
I guess. I know a few poets--most of them are hooked up wit...
Black point
  02/28/18
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Passionate Gaped Location
  02/28/18
i get embarrassed reading people's poems about 99% of the ti...
Pink hairraiser stage
  02/28/18
Yeah, same here.
Black point
  02/28/18
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Black point
  02/28/18
man these are bad, but i dont like poetry generally
dashing corn cake
  02/28/18
Time well spent...
Black point
  02/28/18
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Very tactful library
  02/28/18
Literally shuddered reading these
glittery yapping meetinghouse
  02/28/18
Honestly, the average for most people "in" to writ...
Black point
  02/28/18
Screw the haters. We've seen those clowns struggle to string...
floppy lime dysfunction antidepressant drug
  02/28/18
Thanks man!
Black point
  02/28/18
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Very tactful library
  02/28/18
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dashing corn cake
  02/28/18
cr. lmao at LathamTouchedMe trying to get some dick.
Thirsty principal's office
  02/28/18
This sounds right. The slug one is ok tho.
Bisexual voyeur parlour
  02/28/18
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Black point
  02/28/18
Love poem is verbatim third eye blind lyrics
Fiercely-loyal shivering step-uncle's house
  02/28/18
When i was in hs spanish class i told a dude i was an awesom...
Black point
  02/28/18
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Black point
  03/01/18
http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=3907655&mc=2...
Black point
  03/01/18
after a certain point humanities academics becomes less abou...
Black point
  03/02/18
It's about a small failure = "you have not failed at an...
buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge
  03/02/18
nah I just cut out the title for obvious reasons and wanted ...
Black point
  03/02/18
140 IQ, folks
Hyperactive Beta Striped Hyena
  03/02/18
You should use more pronouns.
buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge
  03/02/18
Yeah I was on a "second person" "you" ki...
Black point
  03/02/18
100% of poetry is faggot. this is no different.
marvelous private investor double fault
  03/02/18
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buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge
  03/03/18
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Black point
  03/03/18
GIRLS ARE SMILING FROM ESCALATORS
buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge
  03/03/18
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Black point
  03/03/18
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Black point
  03/03/18
Ah, poesy!
sickened stimulating space
  03/03/18
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Black point
  03/05/18
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Black point
  03/20/18
abandoned this too early--seems like only a start. What a l...
Black point
  03/20/18
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Black point
  03/20/18
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Black point
  03/26/18
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Black point
  03/26/18


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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:40 PM
Author: Black point



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: Big bearded persian shrine



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: Twisted Supple Trump Supporter

i am embarrassed having read it

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: irradiated hunting ground nursing home

you were like 27 back then.

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: fragrant sick center candlestick maker



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:41 PM
Author: Black point

22

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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:42 PM
Author: irradiated hunting ground nursing home

you'd be a black great grandfather by now.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430836)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:44 PM
Author: Black point

cr. I am living like someone in the future w a 200 year lifespan. Gotta cut that shit out.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430852)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:47 PM
Author: sadistic institution

It's word for water is diminishment

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430866)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:50 PM
Author: Black point

I remember i really liked that line. something like that was a logical conclusion for the idea that rocks get broken up over time. So what would happen to the key inside. lol at me.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35430887)



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Date: February 18th, 2018 12:59 PM
Author: Black point



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: Odious school

This one is the best. The first one would be good if it started with the word "Olympian"

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435803)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: Black point

haha yeah. I guess so. I have more ... not with me, but at home.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435811)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: Titillating faggot firefighter

I like this one

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435810)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:36 AM
Author: lavender concupiscible stage trust fund

Interesting - I didn't mind the first two but this one is a little too kitschy.

And now you're a shitlawyer?

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435821)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:39 AM
Author: Black point

Yep, lawyer now.

I know--its funny that you say that about this one. Bros who aren't "into" poems generally like this one--which I wrote like I was doing a crossword puzzle, counting out syllables only. It also has some humor, which some of my poems of the time lacked. This was one of my earliest efforts.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435837)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:42 AM
Author: Odious school

Trying to make it look like a slug is a little much, but you were 20.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435851)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:45 AM
Author: Black point

lol yeah. heh. I was intimidated by any strict form but I was drawn to the discipline or puzzle aspect of it so I figured I would try something I thought would be easy. easier than a sonnet at least. Although even w sonnets, the more you practice, the better you get.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435865)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:39 AM
Author: disgusting frum crackhouse filthpig

lol that’s actually pretty good

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435839)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:56 AM
Author: exciting mother

i like this one

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435917)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:30 AM
Author: Appetizing depressive garrison

The others were terrible, this one is 180 (although the jury's out on whether the reason it's 180 are unintentional)

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504291)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:04 AM
Author: Black point

Eh half of why any poem works is in the end unintentional, fortuitous meteor, etc

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504634)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge

okay that one was fine

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519367)



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Date: April 24th, 2018 3:59 PM
Author: Magenta razzle new version bawdyhouse

this was good, spaceporn. repoast it, plz.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35910657)



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Date: April 24th, 2018 5:01 PM
Author: Black point

I aim to please. imgurs giving me trouble right now but I will

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35911064)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:28 AM
Author: Black point



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:37 AM
Author: charismatic hot liquid oxygen set

beautiful. thanks for sharing.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435828)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:40 AM
Author: Black point

tyty

Maybe I'll put up some more, from when I was in my late 20s. I'll keep them in this thread so as not to annoy the fuck out of people who don't care.

I wont put up any I actually published, for fear of getting outted by some doobs.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435842)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:41 AM
Author: fantasy-prone home

Great writing for a small child!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35435848)



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Date: February 19th, 2018 9:45 AM
Author: Black point

I know, rite!

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Date: February 20th, 2018 8:54 AM
Author: Black point



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:32 AM
Author: Appetizing depressive garrison

Wily niggers indeed

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504292)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: Black point

180. I saw that too! Lol I knew what's up

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504598)



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Date: February 20th, 2018 8:56 AM
Author: Black point



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge

You published them?

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519363)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:00 AM
Author: Black point

yeah, sorry to say--some of them I did, here and there.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519382)



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Date: February 20th, 2018 2:35 PM
Author: Black point



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Date: February 26th, 2018 2:21 PM
Author: Black point



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Date: February 27th, 2018 9:30 AM
Author: Black point

Post removed by moderator for violating The Law of The Land.

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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:51 AM
Author: filthy cheese-eating mexican circlehead

is there any money anymore in poetry? like fellowships or grants or prizes and so on?

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504306)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:33 AM
Author: Black point

I guess. I know a few poets--most of them are hooked up with universities as teachers, or the spouse makes the money, or there's a trust fund, or some combination of all three. There's usually $5K here and there in prize money those guys occasionally pick up every couple of years. Def not something you can raise a family on though.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504729)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 4:25 AM
Author: Passionate Gaped Location



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Date: February 28th, 2018 5:33 AM
Author: Pink hairraiser stage

i get embarrassed reading people's poems about 99% of the time.

this is no exception.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504320)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:37 AM
Author: Black point

Yeah, same here.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504548)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:29 AM
Author: Black point



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:40 AM
Author: dashing corn cake

man these are bad, but i dont like poetry generally

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504559)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: Black point

Time well spent...

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504601)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:42 AM
Author: Very tactful library



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:00 AM
Author: glittery yapping meetinghouse

Literally shuddered reading these

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504605)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:12 AM
Author: Black point

Honestly, the average for most people "in" to writing poetry is WAY worse. Not praising myself, just keeping it real. Go to any open mic night. Holy fuck. Bunch of retards. Same goes for most schools lit mags.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504667)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:25 AM
Author: floppy lime dysfunction antidepressant drug

Screw the haters. We've seen those clowns struggle to string together a few coherent sentences. These are really good for an amateur writer. Great command of language, nice imagery, fun rhythm.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504698)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:31 AM
Author: Black point

Thanks man!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35504714)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: Very tactful library



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Date: February 28th, 2018 9:32 AM
Author: dashing corn cake



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:54 PM
Author: Thirsty principal's office

cr. lmao at LathamTouchedMe trying to get some dick.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509625)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:59 PM
Author: Bisexual voyeur parlour

This sounds right. The slug one is ok tho.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509649)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:51 PM
Author: Black point

Post removed by moderator for violating The Law of The Land.

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Date: February 28th, 2018 7:59 PM
Author: Fiercely-loyal shivering step-uncle's house

Love poem is verbatim third eye blind lyrics

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509651)



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Date: February 28th, 2018 8:07 PM
Author: Black point

When i was in hs spanish class i told a dude i was an awesome poet and i wrote out the lyrics to john lennon's images of broken light song and passed it to him and he read it and nodded

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35509707)



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Date: March 1st, 2018 6:54 PM
Author: Black point



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Date: March 1st, 2018 7:02 PM
Author: Black point

http://www.xoxohth.com/thread.php?thread_id=3907655&mc=2&forum_id=2

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35516854)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:54 AM
Author: Black point

after a certain point humanities academics becomes less about how much you know or how talented you are and more about how gay-sexy you can be.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519351)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:03 AM
Author: buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge

It's about a small failure = "you have not failed at anything colossal"

Way to turn text into subtext, spaceporn.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519400)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:05 AM
Author: Black point

nah I just cut out the title for obvious reasons and wanted to be clear what the poem was about, notwitstanding

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519413)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:56 AM
Author: Hyperactive Beta Striped Hyena

140 IQ, folks

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519355)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:57 AM
Author: buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge

You should use more pronouns.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519358)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 8:58 AM
Author: Black point

Yeah I was on a "second person" "you" kick for a long time. I don't know--it just had that "talking to myself" quality that I liked.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519369)



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Date: March 2nd, 2018 9:55 AM
Author: marvelous private investor double fault

100% of poetry is faggot. this is no different.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35519645)



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 11:58 AM
Author: buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:08 PM
Author: Black point



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:10 PM
Author: buck-toothed mahogany indian lodge

GIRLS ARE SMILING FROM ESCALATORS

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35526551)



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:12 PM
Author: Black point



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:16 PM
Author: Black point



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Date: March 3rd, 2018 12:19 PM
Author: sickened stimulating space

Ah, poesy!

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35526583)



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Date: March 5th, 2018 9:59 AM
Author: Black point



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:12 AM
Author: Black point



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:23 AM
Author: Black point

abandoned this too early--seems like only a start. What a lazy bastard I was.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=3896708&forum_id=2#35643994)



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Date: March 20th, 2018 9:14 AM
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