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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: concupiscible maniacal home As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: Self-centered cuckoldry "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Cracking Bearded Property they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Adventurous fluffy main people Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: stimulating theater digit ratio As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: startled citrine personal credit line stag film Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: nighttime zombie-like indian lodge toilet seat “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: balding gay lodge circlehead (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: concupiscible maniacal home i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: nighttime zombie-like indian lodge toilet seat Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: concupiscible maniacal home C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: Self-centered cuckoldry "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Cracking Bearded Property Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: nighttime zombie-like indian lodge toilet seat Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Cracking Bearded Property You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: violent ruddy pisswyrm While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: Multi-colored Bull Headed Headpube Antidepressant Drug As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: excitant hominid roast beef This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: concupiscible maniacal home (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376203) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Topaz razzle meetinghouse mental disorder Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Lascivious Seedy Institution A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: sinister copper cruise ship community account i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: concupiscible maniacal home i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: sinister copper cruise ship community account As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: concupiscible maniacal home doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: sinister copper cruise ship community account it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Cracking Bearded Property Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Marvelous Kitty Cat Sanctuary you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Boyish parlor Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: glittery misunderstood faggotry The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: glittery misunderstood faggotry still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: mentally impaired provocative people who are hurt So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Laughsome Ivory Plaza 400 km/h, 450 km/h, 500 km/h, 550 km/h; A could feel the force of the acceleration pressing him against the sport bucket seats of his Turbo Allegra Mk. 2, their soft, well-sourced alcantara cosseting his tightly leather chapped legs, the micromechanical motors within instantaneously adjusting to each minor perturbation in the vehicle's three-axis orientation to keep him perfectly balanced, its SWIFT systems scanning kilometers ahead of them in real-time and predictively modulating the various electromagnetic and anti-kinetic shielding systems in order to protect their passage as they rocketed upward toward the gateway to area X--area X, the Sacred Seat of Cybernetic Heaven, its secrets whispering to the hovels of his birthplace below, beckoning brave boys with the Siren Song: "Come, Unlock Our Treasurehosue of Wonder or Die Trying"; "It's a goddamn marvel--" that was B, his copilot jockey, in the seat beside him--he'd always liked the tech stuff, engineered things were his jig and jive and the natural knack he'd expressed for them had been evident since his Fourth Year when he'd spontaneously programmed a molecular excavator during off time while the rest of the class was at the playground; he and B had been practicing for this for over three years, secretive sessions when the sensor rings slipped from alignment every third week on Sunday for maintena--"we have a fucking BOGEY at 3 o'clock HIGH!" B screamed, interrupting his meditation on the past--the systems of the Allegra were fast, but B was faster and he'd spotted the incoming a split second before the computerized indication of the same: "Warning, SWIFT has detected an intrusion in the third--" he cut off the computer; he knew what he needed to know: C was moving to intercept them in his Outrigger, accompanied by D; they'd planned for this eventuality, both the conflict itself and the psychology of facing your own brother and cousin 45 kilometers up in the air, each precise maneuver tiptoeing on the razor thin edge between life and death, a minute miscalculation capable of throwing you off the wrong side into a fiery midair death--there was something poignant about it, the notion that he could die up here in an instant and to his friends and family in the warrens of Bressville below, toiling through their daily tasks with no comprehension of the enormous aerial pageantry above them, his life could blot out with no greater signifier than a vanishing spot of light in the sky; he banished the thought of this and other things as he shouted in the cockpit "let's smoke these fuckers" and pushed down hard on the throttle, the frame of the Allegra bending, straining, complying with the command as they soared to meet the enemy head on, he and B laughing aloud at the thrill of it all. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376393) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: mentally impaired provocative people who are hurt Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376411) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: Laughsome Ivory Plaza I just copied this from a brief. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376419) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: Bateful toaster (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376866) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: obsidian deranged fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#44008882) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: flatulent police squad (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#44722517) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: Lemon pistol (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#44722548) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: heady chrome temple multi-billionaire Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: High-end emerald resort A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Vivacious smoky fat ankles field two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: brass deer antler party of the first part C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: fragrant nofapping school boistinker As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Bonkers coffee pot corner Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Diverse Wagecucks Cumskin This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: obsidian deranged fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376704) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: excitant hominid roast beef (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376736) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: Laughsome Ivory Plaza (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42377648) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: obsidian deranged fortuitous meteor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: sadistic vibrant stead idea he suggested writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: excitant hominid roast beef Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: duck-like address What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: excitant hominid roast beef You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Adulterous heaven (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Disgusting range patrolman Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Disgusting range patrolman A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: primrose national andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: slate rehab I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Diverse Wagecucks Cumskin great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: demanding misanthropic giraffe Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Marvelous Kitty Cat Sanctuary A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: Marvelous Kitty Cat Sanctuary (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: Marvelous Kitty Cat Sanctuary (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: excitant hominid roast beef Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: outnumbered deep french chef university As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: Self-centered cuckoldry OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: scarlet charismatic dingle berry hell i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Brilliant set (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: outnumbered deep french chef university "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: claret gaming laptop Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Brilliant set (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310764#49827363) |