The most prestigious law school admissions discussion board in the world.
|
 |
 
|
Good writers: Fix this clunky sentence I can't seem to fix
| misunderstood underhanded site | 04/30/21 |
| orange dead mother | 04/30/21 |
| Glittery crotch milk | 04/30/21 |
| odious locus | 04/30/21 |
| Hairraiser bistre pistol rehab | 05/02/21 |
| Aphrodisiac Jet Pozpig | 02/25/22 |
| frozen drab location halford | 04/30/21 |
| Zombie-like Bull Headed Library New Version | 04/30/21 |
| misunderstood underhanded site | 04/30/21 |
| frozen drab location halford | 04/30/21 |
| misunderstood underhanded site | 04/30/21 |
| orange dead mother | 04/30/21 |
| Glittery crotch milk | 04/30/21 |
| frozen drab location halford | 04/30/21 |
| Glittery crotch milk | 04/30/21 |
| coiffed frisky shrine | 04/30/21 |
| pale coffee pot incel | 04/30/21 |
| narrow-minded indirect expression selfie | 04/30/21 |
| vibrant boiling water | 04/30/21 |
| misunderstood underhanded site | 04/30/21 |
| Gay arousing cruise ship roommate | 04/30/21 |
| black low-t boistinker gay wizard | 04/30/21 |
| Lilac fighting rigpig cuck | 04/30/21 |
| salmon quadroon athletic conference | 05/04/22 |
| Cyan diverse community account | 04/30/21 |
| glassy national security agency national | 04/30/21 |
| Irradiated Base | 04/30/21 |
| Filthy blathering heaven telephone | 04/30/21 |
| Mustard Mexican Dilemma | 04/30/21 |
| vibrant boiling water | 04/30/21 |
| Exhilarant Coldplay Fan | 04/30/21 |
| Aqua hideous gas station love of her life | 04/30/21 |
| frum becky parlor | 04/30/21 |
| Gay arousing cruise ship roommate | 04/30/21 |
| clear orchestra pit | 04/30/21 |
| Mustard Mexican Dilemma | 05/01/21 |
| Mustard Mexican Dilemma | 04/30/21 |
| Zombie-like Bull Headed Library New Version | 04/30/21 |
| thriller main people | 04/30/21 |
| Zombie-like Bull Headed Library New Version | 04/30/21 |
| crawly hilarious state | 04/30/21 |
| disturbing stag film faggot firefighter | 04/30/21 |
| Brindle native | 04/30/21 |
| orange dead mother | 04/30/21 |
| Burgundy Party Of The First Part | 04/30/21 |
| misunderstood underhanded site | 04/30/21 |
| Burgundy Party Of The First Part | 04/30/21 |
| misunderstood underhanded site | 04/30/21 |
| Burgundy Party Of The First Part | 04/30/21 |
| Glittery crotch milk | 04/30/21 |
| racy coral depressive | 04/30/21 |
| excitant brilliant sandwich fortuitous meteor | 04/30/21 |
| Zombie-like Bull Headed Library New Version | 04/30/21 |
| Brindle native | 04/30/21 |
| Exhilarant Coldplay Fan | 04/30/21 |
| Razzle-dazzle Death Wish Really Tough Guy | 04/30/21 |
| disturbing stag film faggot firefighter | 04/30/21 |
| Razzle-dazzle Death Wish Really Tough Guy | 04/30/21 |
| frozen drab location halford | 04/30/21 |
| Irradiated Base | 04/30/21 |
| glassy national security agency national | 04/30/21 |
| Territorial trailer park | 04/30/21 |
| awkward razzle theatre | 02/22/22 |
| lime dopamine | 04/30/21 |
| walnut drunken lodge corn cake | 04/30/21 |
| lime dopamine | 04/30/21 |
| walnut drunken lodge corn cake | 04/30/21 |
| Aqua hideous gas station love of her life | 04/30/21 |
| Glittery crotch milk | 04/30/21 |
| Sexy Henna Locale | 04/30/21 |
| Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing | 02/22/22 |
| Tan Meetinghouse Organic Girlfriend | 06/22/22 |
| pale coffee pot incel | 04/30/21 |
| Brindle native | 04/30/21 |
| Sexy Henna Locale | 04/30/21 |
| Gay arousing cruise ship roommate | 04/30/21 |
| thriller main people | 04/30/21 |
| Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing | 04/30/21 |
| Gay arousing cruise ship roommate | 04/30/21 |
| disturbing stag film faggot firefighter | 04/30/21 |
| clear orchestra pit | 06/22/22 |
| vibrant boiling water | 04/30/21 |
| charcoal rough-skinned parlour filthpig | 04/30/21 |
| spectacular bisexual persian set | 04/30/21 |
| thriller main people | 04/30/21 |
| charcoal rough-skinned parlour filthpig | 06/01/21 |
| Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing | 02/22/22 |
| charcoal rough-skinned parlour filthpig | 02/22/22 |
| Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing | 02/25/22 |
| aromatic pearl pervert church building | 05/04/22 |
| Tan Meetinghouse Organic Girlfriend | 06/22/22 |
| Sexy Henna Locale | 06/22/22 |
| Galvanic cream half-breed foreskin | 06/22/22 |
| adulterous lake corner | 04/30/21 |
| crawly hilarious state | 04/30/21 |
| crystalline appetizing multi-billionaire abode | 04/30/21 |
| motley flesh haunted graveyard | 04/30/21 |
| Bright range | 04/30/21 |
| ruddy chapel famous landscape painting | 04/30/21 |
| Bronze greedy associate | 04/30/21 |
| Bearded rose ladyboy laser beams | 04/30/21 |
| thriller main people | 04/30/21 |
| Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing | 04/30/21 |
| vibrant boiling water | 04/30/21 |
| walnut drunken lodge corn cake | 04/30/21 |
| Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing | 02/22/22 |
| curious philosopher-king | 04/30/21 |
| vibrant boiling water | 04/30/21 |
| swollen elastic band | 04/30/21 |
| vibrant boiling water | 04/30/21 |
| Gay arousing cruise ship roommate | 04/30/21 |
| Godawful indian lodge hominid | 04/30/21 |
| Godawful indian lodge hominid | 04/30/21 |
| Exciting fluffy field | 04/30/21 |
| onyx box office | 04/30/21 |
| thriller main people | 04/30/21 |
| marvelous gaming laptop school | 04/30/21 |
| racy coral depressive | 04/30/21 |
| racy coral depressive | 05/02/21 |
| racy coral depressive | 05/23/21 |
| vibrant boiling water | 05/02/21 |
| awkward razzle theatre | 02/22/22 |
| orange dead mother | 02/25/22 |
| Razzmatazz house stock car | 06/22/22 |
| pale coffee pot incel | 04/19/26 |
| awkward razzle theatre | 04/19/26 |
| Brindle native | 04/19/26 |
| pale coffee pot incel | 04/19/26 |
Poast new message in this thread
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: misunderstood underhanded site As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376133) |
 |
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: orange dead mother "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: Glittery crotch milk they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
|
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: odious locus Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42377665) |
|
Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Hairraiser bistre pistol rehab As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42386999) |
|
Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Aphrodisiac Jet Pozpig Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: frozen drab location halford “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Zombie-like Bull Headed Library New Version (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376148) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: misunderstood underhanded site i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: frozen drab location halford Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376166) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: misunderstood underhanded site C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376201) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: orange dead mother "at this time"
ROFL |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: Glittery crotch milk Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376155) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: frozen drab location halford Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376160) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: Glittery crotch milk You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376205) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: coiffed frisky shrine While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376157) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: pale coffee pot incel (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376168) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: narrow-minded indirect expression selfie As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376174) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: vibrant boiling water This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: misunderstood underhanded site (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376203) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Gay arousing cruise ship roommate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376392) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: black low-t boistinker gay wizard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376526) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Lilac fighting rigpig cuck (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376657) |
|
Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: salmon quadroon athletic conference Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44453959) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Cyan diverse community account As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376178) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: glassy national security agency national (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376332) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Irradiated Base (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376340) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Filthy blathering heaven telephone FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376183) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Mustard Mexican Dilemma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376187) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: vibrant boiling water (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376195) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Exhilarant Coldplay Fan (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376249) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Aqua hideous gas station love of her life (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376406) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:36 AM Author: frum becky parlor (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376713) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Gay arousing cruise ship roommate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376724) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: clear orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42377057) |
|
Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: Mustard Mexican Dilemma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42380818) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Mustard Mexican Dilemma As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376184) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Zombie-like Bull Headed Library New Version i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376191) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: thriller main people (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42378174) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Zombie-like Bull Headed Library New Version i hope everyone appreciates the mental illness being performed right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376189) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: crawly hilarious state (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376669) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: disturbing stag film faggot firefighter A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376194) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: Brindle native (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376341) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: orange dead mother sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376816) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Burgundy Party Of The First Part i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: misunderstood underhanded site i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376206) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Burgundy Party Of The First Part As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: misunderstood underhanded site doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376216) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Burgundy Party Of The First Part it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Glittery crotch milk Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: racy coral depressive you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: excitant brilliant sandwich fortuitous meteor Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376217) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Zombie-like Bull Headed Library New Version turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376233) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: Brindle native (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376607) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Exhilarant Coldplay Fan As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376246) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle Death Wish Really Tough Guy The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376290) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:29 AM Author: disturbing stag film faggot firefighter star crossed lovers. reads like brokeback mountain (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376306) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: Razzle-dazzle Death Wish Really Tough Guy still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: frozen drab location halford (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376330) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: Irradiated Base Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376331) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: glassy national security agency national (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376336) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Territorial trailer park A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376358) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:09 AM Author: awkward razzle theatre (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44008930) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: lime dopamine So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376389) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: walnut drunken lodge corn cake 400 km/h, 450 km/h, 500 km/h, 550 km/h; A could feel the force of the acceleration pressing him against the sport bucket seats of his Turbo Allegra Mk. 2, their soft, well-sourced alcantara cosseting his tightly leather chapped legs, the micromechanical motors within instantaneously adjusting to each minor perturbation in the vehicle's three-axis orientation to keep him perfectly balanced, its SWIFT systems scanning kilometers ahead of them in real-time and predictively modulating the various electromagnetic and anti-kinetic shielding systems in order to protect their passage as they rocketed upward toward the gateway to area X--area X, the Sacred Seat of Cybernetic Heaven, its secrets whispering to the hovels of his birthplace below, beckoning brave boys with the Siren Song: "Come, Unlock Our Treasurehosue of Wonder or Die Trying"; "It's a goddamn marvel--" that was B, his copilot jockey, in the seat beside him--he'd always liked the tech stuff, engineered things were his jig and jive and the natural knack he'd expressed for them had been evident since his Fourth Year when he'd spontaneously programmed a molecular excavator during off time while the rest of the class was at the playground; he and B had been practicing for this for over three years, secretive sessions when the sensor rings slipped from alignment every third week on Sunday for maintena--"we have a fucking BOGEY at 3 o'clock HIGH!" B screamed, interrupting his meditation on the past--the systems of the Allegra were fast, but B was faster and he'd spotted the incoming a split second before the computerized indication of the same: "Warning, SWIFT has detected an intrusion in the third--" he cut off the computer; he knew what he needed to know: C was moving to intercept them in his Outrigger, accompanied by D; they'd planned for this eventuality, both the conflict itself and the psychology of facing your own brother and cousin 45 kilometers up in the air, each precise maneuver tiptoeing on the razor thin edge between life and death, a minute miscalculation capable of throwing you off the wrong side into a fiery midair death--there was something poignant about it, the notion that he could die up here in an instant and to his friends and family in the warrens of Bressville below, toiling through their daily tasks with no comprehension of the enormous aerial pageantry above them, his life could blot out with no greater signifier than a vanishing spot of light in the sky; he banished the thought of this and other things as he shouted in the cockpit "let's smoke these fuckers" and pushed down hard on the throttle, the frame of the Allegra bending, straining, complying with the command as they soared to meet the enemy head on, he and B laughing aloud at the thrill of it all. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376393) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: lime dopamine Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376411) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: walnut drunken lodge corn cake I just copied this from a brief. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376419) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:15 AM Author: Aqua hideous gas station love of her life (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376574) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:54 AM Author: Glittery crotch milk Your stuff is the only stuff from here I share w my wife. Every time, I explain that "It's just lawyers--we get bored at work--yeah, I know, that's what makes it funny--" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376824) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:21 PM Author: Sexy Henna Locale (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42377415) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44008886) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Tan Meetinghouse Organic Girlfriend (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44722509) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:51 AM Author: pale coffee pot incel (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376432) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Brindle native titcr. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376504) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:10 AM Author: Sexy Henna Locale 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376531) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:18 AM Author: Gay arousing cruise ship roommate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376589) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:23 AM Author: thriller main people (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376641) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing holy shit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376648) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Gay arousing cruise ship roommate attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376708) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:13 PM Author: disturbing stag film faggot firefighter how (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42377366) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:36 AM Author: clear orchestra pit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44722527) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: vibrant boiling water (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376711) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: charcoal rough-skinned parlour filthpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376866) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: spectacular bisexual persian set (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376872) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 3:27 PM Author: thriller main people (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42378128) |
|
Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: charcoal rough-skinned parlour filthpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42558237) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44008882) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:05 AM Author: charcoal rough-skinned parlour filthpig this is incredible (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44008910) |
|
Date: February 25th, 2022 1:39 PM Author: Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44032706) |
|
Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: aromatic pearl pervert church building (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44453902) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:31 AM Author: Tan Meetinghouse Organic Girlfriend wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44722507) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: Sexy Henna Locale (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44722517) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: Galvanic cream half-breed foreskin (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44722548) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: adulterous lake corner High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376422) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: crawly hilarious state (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376672) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: crystalline appetizing multi-billionaire abode Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376456) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: motley flesh haunted graveyard A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376505) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: Bright range two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376517) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: ruddy chapel famous landscape painting C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376555) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Bronze greedy associate As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376600) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Bearded rose ladyboy laser beams Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: thriller main people This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376665) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376704) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: vibrant boiling water (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376736) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: walnut drunken lodge corn cake (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42377648) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: Flickering Adventurous Genital Piercing (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44008887) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: curious philosopher-king writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376695) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: vibrant boiling water Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376699) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: swollen elastic band What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376738) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: vibrant boiling water You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376746) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Gay arousing cruise ship roommate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42376800) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: Godawful indian lodge hominid Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42377389) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: Godawful indian lodge hominid A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42377381) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Exciting fluffy field andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
|
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: onyx box office I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42377484) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: thriller main people great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42378176) |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: marvelous gaming laptop school Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
|
Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: racy coral depressive A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42379691) |
|
Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: racy coral depressive (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42387061) |
|
Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: racy coral depressive (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42509184) |
|
Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: vibrant boiling water Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#42386977) |
|
Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: awkward razzle theatre As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44008916) |
|
Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: orange dead mother OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44032743) |
|
Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: Razzmatazz house stock car i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#44722512) |
|
Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: pale coffee pot incel (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#49827186) |
|
Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: awkward razzle theatre "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#49827205) |
|
Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: Brindle native Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#49827228) |
|
Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: pale coffee pot incel (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310907#49827363) |