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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:48 AM Author: Snowy Irradiated Telephone As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376133) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:57 AM Author: mauve juggernaut "C was seen driving in the X area, with D as a passenger, by both A and B."
(no one gives a fuck whether A and B were driving or doing a standing 69 at the time they saw these faggots) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: lavender glittery travel guidebook faggot firefighter they do if its an auto case. Contrib or comparative play a role potentially. Better to keep it clean.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:10 PM Author: Blue Parlour Your sentence doesn't even say that A and B saw C and D, just that they passed them. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42377665) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:40 PM Author: Electric Costumed Bbw As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42386999) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:42 PM Author: Talented Milk Subject: Quick fixxx As A and B were driving in X, they passed a car driven by C containing D as a passenger.
EDIT: LMAO at the date |
Date: April 30th, 2021 9:52 AM Author: bull headed filthpig “As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C. D was a passenger in C’s car at the time.”
Would break up the sentences. Your original sentence isn’t terrible though. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:53 AM Author: Silver marvelous mother (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376148) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: Snowy Irradiated Telephone i thought about breaking it up -- it worse because it puts emphasis on "D was a passenger in C’s car at this time" -- which is a minor detail.
it doesn't really matter whether C or D is the driver. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:56 AM Author: bull headed filthpig Ah m, okay. For some reason I assumed that D was the main person. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376166) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Snowy Irradiated Telephone C and D are both involved. I continue to use the term "C's car" for clarity (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376201) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:51 AM Author: mauve juggernaut "at this time"
ROFL |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:54 AM Author: lavender glittery travel guidebook faggot firefighter Need to clarify at some point whether A or B were actually driving. Or were they in two separate cars, both of which passed C. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376155) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: bull headed filthpig Yeah I just worked with the isolated sentence in question b/c I didn’t know what the surrounding sentences are like. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376160) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:04 AM Author: lavender glittery travel guidebook faggot firefighter You can do it in another sentence, but it's going to be important to be clear who was driving in the passing car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376205) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:55 AM Author: insane aromatic striped hyena While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car that C was driving with a passenger, D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376157) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:57 AM Author: Mewling coral center sound barrier (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376168) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:58 AM Author: shivering messiness theater As A and B were driving separately in the X area, they passed a car driven by C which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Amethyst Arousing Meetinghouse This suggestion isn't meant to be used word for word, just generally to give you the right idea on how to handle this sort of thing, please develop as part of an exercise in your own development as a lawyer. Really need to break this into clauses that explain everything.
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C and containing D as a passenger.
WHEREAS A, B, C, and D are human persons domiciled in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS X is a certain area in Jurisdiction Y
WHEREAS A, B, and C are legally authorized to operate motor vehicles ("cars" and each individual such vehicle a "car")
WHEREAS on that certain date, A, B, and C were operating cars.
WHEREAS on that certain date, D was a passenger in the car operated by C.
Now, therefore be it resolved, on that certain date, the aforementioned cars traversed on intersecting paths in Area X.
[I assume by "passed" you mean "passed" as in "they passed by each other while headed in different directions," revise if you mean they were going the same way and A/B's cars passed/overtook C's car.]
Please handle and recirculate, thanks. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:03 AM Author: Snowy Irradiated Telephone (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376203) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: Fighting masturbator (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376392) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:08 AM Author: multi-colored sepia cruise ship (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376526) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:25 AM Author: Ruddy chapel (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376657) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:40 PM Author: Concupiscible school cafeteria Very clear, no ambiguity, reads like 1st order logic, I like it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44453959) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: beady-eyed hell personal credit line As A and B entered the X area, they looked at each other, and although none of them said a word, they understood each other perfectly. It was X area after all. Are there any Xs around, they wondered? They passed a beaten-up vehicle with ridiculous oversized chromed wheels with C as a driver and D as a passenger. X's! - thought A and B. C and D did not think anything. They were high. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376178) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:36 AM Author: Indigo outnumbered theater stage idiot (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376332) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: red temple karate (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376340) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: Provocative Orange Stag Film FRIENDLESS FAGGOT BIRDSHIT A was driving some FAGgOt BIRdshit car alone(some other NIFmGGA was drivomg alone in another car) they passed ALPHA TURD C , who has MANY DRINKING BUDDIES, SO NATURALLY HAD A PASSENGER (most likely an AZNgirl getting wet for MAMMOTH TURDCOCK) (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376183) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: zombie-like pit tank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376187) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Amethyst Arousing Meetinghouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376195) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Fragrant Ivory Cuckold (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376249) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: magical mind-boggling party of the first part crackhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376406) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:37 AM Author: Fighting masturbator (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376724) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:32 PM Author: Free-loading honey-headed people who are hurt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42377057) |
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Date: May 1st, 2021 12:19 AM Author: zombie-like pit tank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42380818) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 9:59 AM Author: zombie-like pit tank As A and B were sucking each other’s cocks in the XXX area, C drove by with D cumming in his ass. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376184) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:00 AM Author: Silver marvelous mother i think you nailed it. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376191) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Brindle set (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42378174) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: fuchsia boltzmann (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376669) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Galvanic Claret New Version A and B passed D and C, who was driving. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376194) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:37 AM Author: idiotic dysfunction market (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376341) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:52 AM Author: mauve juggernaut sounds like a riddle (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376816) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:01 AM Author: Mustard hall i hate this crap
As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D driving with C. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: Snowy Irradiated Telephone i wish this works and it sounds nice but it seems slightly off (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376206) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Mustard hall As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed by D (who was driving with C).
This is it |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:07 AM Author: Snowy Irradiated Telephone doesn't it need "D's car" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376216) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:42 AM Author: Mustard hall it says he was driving, which means an automobile.
if you think specifying what kind of automobile is a key detail then can add that |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:05 AM Author: lavender glittery travel guidebook faggot firefighter Why do you need B, assuming A was driving. Don't say B was driving. Ever. If he wasnt.
As A was driving, they passed ... |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:06 AM Author: Umber naked ladyboy you have to make it more exciting. keep the reader interested.
"Where did this take place? In X. And what happened in X? A and B were together in a car. And what did that car do? Why it passed by another car, a car driven by C. And was C alone in that second car? No, no C was not. C was with D. That's right. A and B passed C and D. It's all true." |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:08 AM Author: Yellow Shaky Base Boiling Water Were A and B both at the wheel? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376217) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:13 AM Author: Silver marvelous mother turns out it was a tandem bicycle. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376233) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:20 AM Author: idiotic dysfunction market (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376607) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:18 AM Author: Fragrant Ivory Cuckold As some faggot and his friend were driving in the restricted area, they passed a car driven by a nigger and containing some other faggot as a passenger. Regards, I hope this helps. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376246) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:26 AM Author: flushed hairraiser alpha stead The two cars passed in X. In one, A was driving B. In the other, C was driving D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376290) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:31 AM Author: flushed hairraiser alpha stead still the best way to do it. He has more than a handful of items to hit: location, two cars, who was each driver and who was each passenger, that they passed.
This does it and leaves no uncertainty at all |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:34 AM Author: bull headed filthpig (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376330) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:35 AM Author: red temple karate Okay? Wow. Hey. Picture this: Cars A and B. Right? Going through section X. *makes large "X" using forearms* And boom! Right there, they pass car C. *makes "C" using hand* A car which, at the time, was containing D *unzips pants* as a passenger. *pulls cock out of fly* Any questions? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376331) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:40 AM Author: Green underhanded garrison sandwich A and B, as was their custom from time to time, were engaged in that most fanciful of modern hobbies, navigation of modern paved roads in a device propelled by an internal combustion engine, whence, they happened to pass by and through the X area. It was delightful that time of year and a welcome respite from their usual tiresome surroundings. And, as fate or chance, or even perhaps the Muses had it, another fellow engaged in the very same hobby happened by. Of course, known to them, and combustion engine navigators the State over, twas C along with D. Both were fair fellows and known to A and B. As custom would insist they happened both to notice and acknowledge each other, hobbyists in the same pursuit as they were. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376358) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:44 AM Author: Charismatic lilac lodge So, we need to talk about A driving around with B. Here's the thing: they were in X area, and what's problematic is they passed by C—yes, THAT C. C had a passenger at the time, D. Here's why that's not okay. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:45 AM Author: startled fortuitous meteor gas station 400 km/h, 450 km/h, 500 km/h, 550 km/h; A could feel the force of the acceleration pressing him against the sport bucket seats of his Turbo Allegra Mk. 2, their soft, well-sourced alcantara cosseting his tightly leather chapped legs, the micromechanical motors within instantaneously adjusting to each minor perturbation in the vehicle's three-axis orientation to keep him perfectly balanced, its SWIFT systems scanning kilometers ahead of them in real-time and predictively modulating the various electromagnetic and anti-kinetic shielding systems in order to protect their passage as they rocketed upward toward the gateway to area X--area X, the Sacred Seat of Cybernetic Heaven, its secrets whispering to the hovels of his birthplace below, beckoning brave boys with the Siren Song: "Come, Unlock Our Treasurehosue of Wonder or Die Trying"; "It's a goddamn marvel--" that was B, his copilot jockey, in the seat beside him--he'd always liked the tech stuff, engineered things were his jig and jive and the natural knack he'd expressed for them had been evident since his Fourth Year when he'd spontaneously programmed a molecular excavator during off time while the rest of the class was at the playground; he and B had been practicing for this for over three years, secretive sessions when the sensor rings slipped from alignment every third week on Sunday for maintena--"we have a fucking BOGEY at 3 o'clock HIGH!" B screamed, interrupting his meditation on the past--the systems of the Allegra were fast, but B was faster and he'd spotted the incoming a split second before the computerized indication of the same: "Warning, SWIFT has detected an intrusion in the third--" he cut off the computer; he knew what he needed to know: C was moving to intercept them in his Outrigger, accompanied by D; they'd planned for this eventuality, both the conflict itself and the psychology of facing your own brother and cousin 45 kilometers up in the air, each precise maneuver tiptoeing on the razor thin edge between life and death, a minute miscalculation capable of throwing you off the wrong side into a fiery midair death--there was something poignant about it, the notion that he could die up here in an instant and to his friends and family in the warrens of Bressville below, toiling through their daily tasks with no comprehension of the enormous aerial pageantry above them, his life could blot out with no greater signifier than a vanishing spot of light in the sky; he banished the thought of this and other things as he shouted in the cockpit "let's smoke these fuckers" and pushed down hard on the throttle, the frame of the Allegra bending, straining, complying with the command as they soared to meet the enemy head on, he and B laughing aloud at the thrill of it all. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376393) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:47 AM Author: Charismatic lilac lodge Wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376411) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: startled fortuitous meteor gas station I just copied this from a brief. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376419) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:15 AM Author: magical mind-boggling party of the first part crackhouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376574) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:54 AM Author: lavender glittery travel guidebook faggot firefighter Your stuff is the only stuff from here I share w my wife. Every time, I explain that "It's just lawyers--we get bored at work--yeah, I know, that's what makes it funny--" (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376824) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:21 PM Author: cream laughsome dilemma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42377415) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: Abusive Motley Parlor Coldplay Fan (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44008886) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:51 AM Author: Mewling coral center sound barrier (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376432) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: idiotic dysfunction market titcr. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376504) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:10 AM Author: cream laughsome dilemma 180 (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376531) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:18 AM Author: Fighting masturbator (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376589) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:23 AM Author: Brindle set (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376641) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: Abusive Motley Parlor Coldplay Fan holy shit (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376648) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Fighting masturbator attn low attention span poasters read this whole thing pls (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376708) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:13 PM Author: Galvanic Claret New Version how (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42377366) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:36 AM Author: Free-loading honey-headed people who are hurt (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44722527) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:35 AM Author: Amethyst Arousing Meetinghouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376711) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:00 PM Author: magenta beta indian lodge half-breed (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376866) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 12:01 PM Author: offensive ceo native (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376872) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:27 PM Author: Brindle set (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42378128) |
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Date: June 1st, 2021 9:20 PM Author: magenta beta indian lodge half-breed (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42558237) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:00 AM Author: Abusive Motley Parlor Coldplay Fan (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44008882) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:05 AM Author: magenta beta indian lodge half-breed this is incredible (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44008910) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:39 PM Author: Abusive Motley Parlor Coldplay Fan (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44032706) |
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Date: May 4th, 2022 12:31 PM Author: deep hyperactive blood rage (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44453902) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:31 AM Author: big aqua tattoo antidepressant drug wow (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44722507) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:34 AM Author: cream laughsome dilemma (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44722517) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:44 AM Author: spectacular chad faggotry (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44722548) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:49 AM Author: adventurous son of senegal High | level | legal work (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376422) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:28 AM Author: fuchsia boltzmann (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376672) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 10:55 AM Author: Very tactful chartreuse trailer park persian Each of A and B were driving in AREA. They both passed a car driven by C with D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376456) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:05 AM Author: Swashbuckling Area A and B passed a car driven by C, who was transporting D as a passenger, as they drove through the X area. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376505) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:07 AM Author: learning disabled university two people, a & b, drove past c driving with d in his car. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376517) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:13 AM Author: High-end Range Macaca C and his passenger D were traveling in X area. A overtook and passed them. B overtook and passed them too. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376555) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:19 AM Author: Lime location As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C, which contained D as a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376600) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:24 AM Author: sable lettuce pistol Haven’t read any of the replies, so someone else may have made the same suggestion, but I’d go with:
While driving in the X area, A & B passed a car containing C (driver) and D (passenger). |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:27 AM Author: Brindle set This was basically gromjoh's poast above except his was more concise. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376665) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:34 AM Author: Abusive Motley Parlor Coldplay Fan (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376704) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Amethyst Arousing Meetinghouse (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376736) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 2:08 PM Author: startled fortuitous meteor gas station (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42377648) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:01 AM Author: Abusive Motley Parlor Coldplay Fan (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44008887) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Bearded confused institution rigpig writing MFE's, any resources on improving clunky writing? I recently jumped from GOV to tech (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376695) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:33 AM Author: Amethyst Arousing Meetinghouse Did you try the hydro hack? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376699) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:40 AM Author: Violent misunderstood heaven What’s that (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376738) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:41 AM Author: Amethyst Arousing Meetinghouse You should drink more water, you're probably dehydrated. This will, among other things, improve cognitive function and therefore improve your writing. While you're at it also check your posture I bet you're slouching right now. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376746) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 11:49 AM Author: Fighting masturbator (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42376800) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:17 PM Author: nofapping razzle volcanic crater national Just write in the active voice with short simple sentences, subject verb object. Not hard (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42377389) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:16 PM Author: nofapping razzle volcanic crater national A and B saw C driving in X (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42377381) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:28 PM Author: Excitant really tough guy andy and brad were driving around brooklyn when they passed carl and dave in their car.
this doesn't define who is driving and who is riding though.
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Date: April 30th, 2021 1:38 PM Author: Kink-friendly laser beams becky I am gay (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42377484) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:36 PM Author: Brindle set great thread (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42378176) |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 3:39 PM Author: doobsian resort mad cow disease Shitty writing is putting too much into one sentence. A and B were driving in the X area. [query: are they both driving separate cars?] C driving D passed them. |
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Date: April 30th, 2021 8:29 PM Author: Umber naked ladyboy A and C, drivers, were in different cars, driving through area X, and with them were B and D, passengers; B was with A while D was with C; A and B passed by C and D. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42379691) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:50 PM Author: Umber naked ladyboy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42387061) |
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Date: May 23rd, 2021 3:44 PM Author: Umber naked ladyboy (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42509184) |
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Date: May 2nd, 2021 12:36 PM Author: Amethyst Arousing Meetinghouse Where are we on this? Thank (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#42386977) |
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Date: February 22nd, 2022 10:06 AM Author: Aggressive corn cake As A and B were driving in the X area, they passed a car driven by C in which D was a passenger. (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44008916) |
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Date: February 25th, 2022 1:44 PM Author: mauve juggernaut OP, does this help? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44032743) |
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Date: June 22nd, 2022 9:32 AM Author: White factory reset button i don't think anyone reads shitlaw shitpaper so it doesn't matter. aren't state court judges borderline retarded? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#44722512) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:23 PM Author: Mewling coral center sound barrier (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#49827186) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 12:42 PM Author: Aggressive corn cake "and containing D as" -> "in which D was", otherwise fine (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#49827205) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 1:15 PM Author: idiotic dysfunction market Lots of helpful suggestions in this thread but I’m not sure we’ve got it figured out just yet. Let’s put a pin in it and move on. OP: what’s the next sentence? (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#49827228) |
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Date: April 19th, 2026 2:57 PM Author: Mewling coral center sound barrier (http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=4823221&forum_id=2\u0026mark_id=5310908#49827363) |