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rate this poem I wrote for my wife I think it will win awards for best Poem

My lovely wife You're older now You're 38 You once were...
odious alpha
  10/09/26
Its one of those avant garde poems that doesn't have to nece...
odious alpha
  10/09/26
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odious alpha
  10/09/26
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Burgundy national
  10/09/26
You'll miss 38
Demanding boistinker
  10/09/26
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motley arrogant hairy legs
  10/09/26
Could you express this as a poem
odious alpha
  10/09/26
this won the nobel prize so you have some stiff competition ...
massive mediation
  10/09/26
Yeah mine is way better
odious alpha
  10/09/26


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Date: October 9th, 2026 1:43 AM
Author: odious alpha

My lovely wife

You're older now

You're 38

You once were young

Your tits were great

You've lost your glow

You're 38

I wish you were young

You're middle aged

38 god damn years

how many left

You've changed and grown

And added heft

I wish you were thin and young

but you're a mom

aged 38



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50179760)



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Date: October 9th, 2026 1:44 AM
Author: odious alpha

Its one of those avant garde poems that doesn't have to necessarily rhyme or be good. You just feel the emotion as you read it.

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50179764)



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Date: October 9th, 2026 9:35 AM
Author: odious alpha



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50180050)



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Date: October 9th, 2026 9:43 AM
Author: Burgundy national



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50180075)



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Date: October 9th, 2026 9:47 AM
Author: Demanding boistinker

You'll miss 38

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50180085)



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Date: October 9th, 2026 9:52 AM
Author: motley arrogant hairy legs



(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50180098)



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Date: October 9th, 2026 9:53 AM
Author: odious alpha

Could you express this as a poem

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50180101)



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Date: October 9th, 2026 10:08 AM
Author: massive mediation

this won the nobel prize so you have some stiff competition

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/HUHfdrNbcAAKfTM.jpg

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50180129)



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Date: October 9th, 2026 10:23 AM
Author: odious alpha

Yeah mine is way better

(http://www.autoadmit.com/thread.php?thread_id=5911035&forum_id=2#50180141)